September 20, 2009

Back I came to you,



Back I came to you,
I stood at your doorstep...

I stood at your doorstep,
waiting to be held,
by the hand and lead, through
the path I always fancied,

With every step I took,

I felt your presence more
than a moment earlier,
I curled it up entire, all at once.

I felt my arms around you,
tied in a beautiful bow,
how I prayed it wasn't a dream
I opened my eyes, only to see

I was back to you,
I was at your doorstep...

With every step I vowed,
never to let this distance win,
That I would do anything,
to win you back, all again.

I saw the dreaded spark,
right in your eye it dwelled
the look of disbelief,
why and how I got so close within.

I knew what I d lost,
the smell of your breath, just as sweet
as the look in your eye, and the touch
of your hands just as warm.

I wept myself out,
not at all to be heard,
Blamed myself for all the,
thought, worry and discomfort.

I tried telling myself it would pass,
I wiped my eyes, and
looked across,
I was back to the place that I am

I was back to you,
I was at your doorstep...

This time I want to be sure
to disgust or wander I wouldn't allow
I will have things all my way,
when asleep I rule my world I know.

I close my eyes all again,
I am back, at your doorstep...
I am back, at your doorstep...




10 comments:

Surfer Earning Free said...

Wow great writing.. Did you write this?
Dealz
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jaishu said...

nice one..keep writing ...!!
whose door step where u at..?heheh(excuse ma pathetic attempt at humor).

"I will have things all my way,
when asleep I rule my world I know."
is wat i liked the most.

looking forward for more...!!

starbrained said...

Oh...wow.
I felt that.
I think I might cry.

Priyanka Tadipatri said...

@Dealz: Of course. :-)
@Jaishu: Not necessarily one person or thing. Thats a part-experience part-fiction expression. Don't think much :-P
@Some Girl: Thanks :-)

Vira Komarraju said...

I came upon your blog, meandering from a friend's blog...read all your entries. thought I'd leave my fingerprints and thoughtprints too...you have a promising talent for wielding the pen, and your thoughts are in sync too...keep it going!
All the best

Leave a Legacy said...

Thanks for visiting me, and I'm so glad you did, because now I've had a chance to read your work and it's very well written.
I'll continue on to read your other sites and take a look at your Etsy site.
I'll be following to get to know you better.
Nina

DIPTI RANJAN PANDA said...

Engineers are better poets...I no more need an example..:).keep writting..

Tuesdai Noelle said...

Indepth emotions captured in a small thought that's sweet and sincere....

http://areflectionbytuesdai.blogspot.com

Yvette said...

so subtile...thank for visiting!

yvette

Suzanne Rowley said...

This is truly beautiful