Back to me, in time today...
Back to me, my minds that say,
Back i come, to nowhere now,
Back i come in this endless love.
Nothing is left to be re-written,
Nothing is left to be cried on,
Nothing at all i can see and say,
What was i doing there?? anyway!
The place i belong of twisters unsolved,
The place i belong of tales unheard,
This place i never thought i ll reach for,
This place i ve reached, in the wet of the shore.
Some said i was mean,
Some said, i was good being mean,
Some never said a thing,
Maybe, those were better; those words unseen.
People think, people say,
People remind of errors like they,
have none for their own memoirs,
Hey you! What have u been doing this far??
What am i doing here, i ask myself,
It gives no answer cuz, it knows none,
Do i stick here, like the book in the shelf??
Do i stay, here; what is the whole fun?!
Thinking so now, that i decide,
Thinking of things i shall never hide,
from 'people' that i do not know,
from my self, i ll will never stride.
Facts i need not, others to listen
Things i don't even have to tell,
Truth about my-hood, and life and all,
Beliefs; that only alone, i wouldn't fall.
There was never a better time.
Than now, with the only one i love,
Me! alone, I'm happy , all right,
call it selfishness?? i call it My Life!
11 comments:
This poem here leaves an essence of your attitude towards in a way direct or indirect. Incorporating such a profound meaning into mere words is an art by itself and I see that u excel at it. Great job buddy! Am luking forwad for more on this page...go ahead! the sky is the limit!
Nice one. It really says something about you as a person rather than a blogger. I hope to read more things from you.
well...amazin to c u write thngz..vch r such a treat to read on....u seem to get better evry time....kudos buddy!!!
...has a element of variety in it....i mean u alwazz come up with some thng so different evry time....
loved da pic...suits da poem to da hilt....
roll on...!!!!gr8 goin...!!!rock ya!!!
Hey! Nice one, Waiting for more :)
@Reema: thank you so much for being here :) Do keep visiting often
@Kalyani: (Anonynous :P): You cud have left your name :P
@Jaishu: U always make me feel proud of myself!:D
And i guess, u shud be writing more ofetn now.. :)
@Samarth: Thanx :)
Pri..
I like d rhythm dat every line follows...
Hey Tomz,
Thanx a lot for liking it! :)
another nice work...it really says something about your way of looking at things...at life ..may be your life....
i do have a question though
"What am i doing here, i ask myself,
It gives no answer cuz, it knows none,
Do i stick here, like the book in the shelf??
Do i stay, here; what is the whole fun?!"
what you have said in this part...it seems is trus for many engineering students...i face a lot of people wid same question..curious it makes me why?
Hey there!
Thanx for being here,
Well, about those lines, there are different kindsa interpretetion u can attach to it.
One,could be, about my Engineering life as such. I joined this stream of mechanical engineering, with 'love' for mechanics. But i ended up learning economics, a subject, tried getting rid of, in every choice i made in my career so far, all in vain.
Though it isn't a regret, about my decision, it does add to my disgust that i have to do things i hate to do, just because everyone does so. I dont realize the reason. But i still don't rebel. I just follow.
Why?? remains a question!
PEACE.
such simplicity in the words yet such complexity in the meaning...and its such a reflection of your personality and mine..as a matter of fact...love what you wrote...keep it going
Hey Vaish!
Welcome to what i call, My World. :)
I hope u keep liking it.
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